Monday, June 11, 2018

Our Last Breath (...The Only Debt We Owe Time)


Most of the people still call this planet their home
Some murder innocent souls just to own a piece
Others believe theirs is somewhere in the skies
Alas a handful of people hope of life hereafter
But nobody knows what lies beyond this realm

Our expectation of an eternal journey is no ruse
As many would argue in order to dent the truth
Of what had been and continues to use everyone
In a world where many of us are still deliberating
If there's someplace somewhere only death gives

A new home after earth will always be a hotshot
About the soul's endurance beyond the end of life
And this has become a tasteless thought for many
Who strongly believe that our presence on earth
Was as a result of a time-worn blast presumption

No human can stop or slow the passage of time
Since our existence is remotely measured by it
After all it started the day we were duly conceived
Time had been and still remains the marker of life
That ensures our exits when we run out of breath

The thought of your last breath could be frightening
A moment of a fleeting transition into the unknown
Where many believe reincarnation is their best shot
To a place where they hope to relive their lives again
But who wants to return or knows where we're headed?


In Loving Memory of 
Emuesiri, Eunice, Rosemary, Tunde, Wale and others who PAID their DEBTS too SOON -- and to everyone still breathing: "conserve your breath until the timekeeper beckons"


13 comments:

  1. Onisoshenemen, bright nd benneth i read this poem nd remember those fun days with you guys, keep resting till we meet again��

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  2. my oh my! Eduvie you've really grown in your write ups. frankly speakimg, I love all ur poems buh you nailed this one. more wisdom and inspiration, good job my boy lol (Theresa)

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  3. Nice one Eduvie))

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  4. More than just a words!

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  5. Deep and very thoughtful. You had me thinking all night Eduvie, but thanks for sharing))

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  6. Your poem touched my soul; it made me think about eternity and the possibility of life after death... Great job Eduvie! I wish you more inspiration, and may every poem you write from now on be a masterpiece. Your student, Tanya!

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  7. Wow!this is so touching.thanks for writing such an authentic peom God bless you Donald.

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  8. indeed our dear Emuesiri paid it too soon.gone but can never be forgotten.nice work Mr Dew

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  9. Such a wise and touching words. You talent grow with every next poem, great job

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  10. oh my goodness! this is what i call creativity at its finest. the truth, feelings and message in every stanza is beautiful. the way you start and close your poems is powerful. thanks for remembering and honoring the departed, may we meet them again on the other side.

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  11. Wow!!! The Emperor is back! Am always very excited to read your write ups! This is absolutely amazing! Each time I read your write up I learn new things. This is good! Nice one! Keep it up! #Monaco

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  12. Chai... The Emperor himself. You really finish work here. So real, so deep, so inspiring, so thoughtful, and so touching. Nice one bro
    More wisdom from above I pray for you.(Vincentino)

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