She was a
believer until reality jolted her out of her reverie
She was
sleepwalking in the endless when she bumped into you
She thought
dreams were meaningless until she dared to dream
She was unsure
about what it meant until you gave her a hint
He thought your
reception had ensured him a place in your abode
He thought his
coronation had earned him the kingship in your empire
He thought your
interest in his future would make him yours
He thought your
resistance was a test to keep him fighting
Your proposal was
tempting but it was not what she bargained for
Your denials
stripped her of her right to residency in your heart
Your act of
diplomacy was a ruse in order to manipulate her
Your constant
rejections almost made her unworthy of love
The emotional
pains he endured drained him of his faith in love
Your love résumé
was great but your agenda ruined your chances
You had the
freedom to explore his life but you chose to exploit him
He thought he
made it into your dreams just as you made it into his
It is true life
goes on but the memories are forever imprinted
It is obvious you
could care less but your reputation precedes you
Your heart is
turbulent and nobody wants to experience it.
A slice of bread
is good but a lifetime meal supersedes a leftover.
Dedicated
To Everyone
Just
like the ocean, there is surface and depth in all of us.
This is touching. It feels like a message to someone so dear. Nice poem
ReplyDeleteGreat piece! 👍
ReplyDeleteIt is sad to see that many people can't make their minds but they prefer to use and dump innocent hearts. Thank you Eduvie for your poetry and brilliance. ♡✧˚♡˚
ReplyDeletei think that online dating is the cause of this kind of relationships. i am not a remnant but i am a victim(( but thank you for this poem)
ReplyDeleteA slice of bread is good but a lifetime meal supersedes a leftover. My gee, you are a genius.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is simply wonderful, I think it will not leave anyone indifferent, and will make everyone who reads it think, just like me.
ReplyDeleteEduvie) I am single but does that mean I am a marital remnant?)) we need to talk, I need you to explain me the whole poem))
ReplyDeleteIf you read my comment have you broken someone heart in your life? Me, I have but I am happy I am single and no more unnecessary dramas. Anyway thank you for this beautiful poem. 🌞😍
ReplyDeletePermit me to take this to the next level by sharing on page. It touches everyone, everywhere.
ReplyDeleteBravo, Mr Author, what a weaving of words and senses! Cool, thanks 👌
ReplyDeleteI know many many people will deny it but almost every body are guilty and marital remnants are every where. I know this because this bring back many sad moments. I love your poems 💕 💛😍 💗
ReplyDeleteI am a victim too and it is hard to be a marital remnant when the person you want to be your partner for life is a player. No trusts, no seriousness, no commitments, no future. Very very deep poem but it is also the truth. Thank you)
ReplyDeletecrumbs that look crunchy. Eduvie, really?))) you are a wordsmith and i admire that in you) keep it up dude 👍
ReplyDeleteTo my mind i am a married woman and if your hubby does not want you as he supposed to i think you are a marital remnant. sorry but that is my view of the poem. Eduvie is a smart man and he put it to make you think about yourself. 😍🥰
ReplyDeleteSad in this age some people are evil and heartless 💔. This is a balanced poem about women and men and men could be marital remnants too but women suffer more 😢 because of society plus outdated cultures.
ReplyDeleteEduvie you just open a pandora's box) and many people especially pretenders will hate you for this beautiful poem without even understanding the context(( but for me it makes me think of my life more deeply than before. 🤔🤔🤔 the part you said, he thought he made it into your dreams just as you made it into his is very very important in any kind of relationships. Anyway, thank you for sharing your poem with me)
ReplyDeleteThe moral of the poem is there is always someone will take your heart for granted, hurt you no matter how much you love him/her. But my small piece of advice is look crunchy, remain crunchy and enjoy peace.)
ReplyDeleteDeep and very useful) I am crunchy 😉 and no one could break 💔 my heart because I know the game now))
ReplyDeleteI understood at a young age people cannot always have what they want from a relationship and i have lived my life like this since, so i don't like putting too much expectations on a man. Amazing poem, life goes on but the memories are forever imprinted)
ReplyDeleteEduvie) beautiful poem) love kills faster than drugs nowadays if a people overdose themselves with too much love) i always learn from your poems)
ReplyDeleteHey Eduvie) sorry for my lateness) i say well done andd keep blessing us with your brilliant poems)) i enjoyed it)
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